The game is pretty okay and the story quite good (even if it's too slow for me), but PLEASE make an effort on the English !!! There are so many typos and even grammatical errors it's painful to read sometimes >_< (I'm not a native speaker but the errors are not even high-school level).
I personally prefer slower updates but with quality, this bad English nearly makes me want to drop the game. Too bad because otherwise the job is pretty good overall.
EDIT : went to the end but I drop the game, the text is really shitty quality now, Google trad do a better job.
Im from Germany and havent learned English in a Native Way but i dont know what your Problem is.
Its probably your Second Visual Novel , i find the Writing very good and the English is always understandable and Contains no Misspelling or Gramatical Errors.
Play games like Halfway house, Esteria, My New Memories, Price of Power or Eternum and you will see what good English really is. For Dark Magic the first half is okay but after that the text quality becomes more bad with every scene. Anyone can objectively sees that.
And no, as you can see it's not my second visual novel, I've done enough, independent ones like dark magic and more professional ones like those you can find on Mangagamer.
But hey, if you enjoy that level of English and it doesn't break your immersion good for you. Personally I prefer to play better quality games, that's all.
lol when Nami and Jack bang in Jacks house Jack says how long hes waited to see Nami naked but at this point in the story i've already banged her like 500 times and see her naked constantly
"imwis". oh shut up, that helps literally no one. If you have a problem and someone else doesnt see it, explain it. They asked what makes the game pedophilic? I havent played it but i dont see anything remotely child looking other than Taka's kid and im positive that kids not involved in anything or else there would be a lot more complaints. i see nothing that says underage, so please elaborate
if you werent so IQ deficient, you'd realise it means "i mean what i said". end of story. if ppl cant read plain english, then they shouldnt be inventing acronyms that dont exist, l;et alone be using an english language website. FYI: taka's kid engages in sexualised activity immediately after actual intercourse has taken place, and there is a widely known and widely circulated mod (it is part of the basic mod pack) to make the child nude. from a person who enjoyed the the game, the game doesnt belong on THIS website. it belongs on the darkweb
Ok, dumbass, I know what imwis stands for. But clearly I had never played this game and the original comment probably didn't either. So instead of being an ass, just explain it like you did in the FYI. Not everyone has played every porn game on ITCH like you so clearly have. Imagine for a second you happened upon some random show on Netflix and some random review said "This show supports pedophilia!"
Are you just gonna agree with this one comment out of the million others that don't mention it at all, or are you gonna ask for some more information? I'd hope you'd ask for more info because we live in a time where people lie on the internet about anything and everything just for attention.
This game is best overall but there are some irritating things. Like we get respect from the queen of the kingdom but the MC gets easily insulted by that little bitch(azumi). Just remove that dirty girl from the game.
i mean ur right, i just wish i had a sene for when to expect an update. that way i can plan my downloads and whatnot. is there anywhere i can check like a progress report or something?
It's easy to figure out if you paid attention to all the similarities between the 3 suspects and what happened to girl that was killed. A hint there might be more than one suspect.
Honorable mentions: College Bound, College Kings, A House in a Rift, Awakening and Treasure of Nadia (<----this last one can easily be on 1st place on another category). I recommend all these games.
Bro do you know a game where there was some sort of love drugs that u had to make and u could control girls there was milf and sister. I played a long time ago now I can't remember. I think it was made on renpy please if u know reply.
Hmmmmm....love drugs. The only game that comes to mind is Lust Epidemic which are the same developers of Treasure of Nadia. There's a sister which is a nun and milf in the game and they were investigating a university. I don't know if it's that one, but do let me know.
Hi F. Lord, could you tell me how long until the public release of V.0.14.0? Because I'm loving the depth of your storyline. But I nearly died laughing when being able to lash those girls butts as a punishment for what they did. (Not giving away any spoilers) and also, Some of the Characters in the character menu have N/A below their picture, What exactly does that mean? Please let me know, Thanks.
I rated this game 4 stars simply because of its detail, however there is only 1 game that has managed to score 5 stars from me and that one is called Serenity, the detail, storyline, characters and themes were all perfectly in tandem, but this game runs a very close 2nd, I like the detail and the abilities to corrupt the minds of the girls, but I think in order to make it better this game needs more added to it because it doesn't feel like it's finished yet.
so can i get a bit of help? i'm suppose to look for something in the moms room but nothing is showing up. my first guess is the dildo but i'm pretty sure i already took that for the mom quest line so i dunno what i'm suppose to do here.(for the red witch quest)
So this game is finished? Cause Its say "released" but some feature like group corruption still in development and some of the girls story' like yasuko still unfinished
So i just finished what i can in the game, and i have to say, honestly this game is awesome. Lets start with the story first, it is so well written and it has good pacing, the charters each have there own charm to them, and they are well designed even down to the little details and in a game where a lot of them where the same attar its the little details that count and this game has nailed that. The working system is very fair making it not to much of a grind to gain money in game, the story while being light hearted at most points still shows that there is a time of darkness coming meaning we can see a darker story in future updates and im all for it. All and all if your looking for a nice adventure with very well written and designed charters this is the game for you. Keep up the great work creator i look forward to future updates.
This game is very great, it has long good story, a lot of beautiful girl, the scene it's not repetitive, the grind is just enough, not to hard not to easy, and it's free. Very good game
I am somehow stuck with the Magic route storyline. It says I have to 'continue magic route story-line to progress' but it does not say how and I have been searching for a couple of hours by now.
overall its a good game, with heaps of story content.. but expect heavy rail-roading down paths you dont want to take, none of the story paths seem to be optional. i hope we get to go out on the sisters ship, first goddamn opportunity i get, imma feed Nami to a shark and get her outta my hair for good. i have absolutely no interest in her, as a figure or a character, she is unattractive and has a boring and unexciting personality, and yet for some reason the game has decided im in love with her (even after choosing to NOT tell her 'i love you' when given the rare choice) and it seems now she's the one im going to be forced to marry, although she would be my last choice from everyone in the game. this has nothing to do ewith her looks - but her personality is that of a cow, she comes in for milking when called, she goes back out to pasture when dismissed, and thats the entire extent of her personality. .... oh, and what happened to the MAGIC? can only use it on a handful of women to start with, so its pretty much not even part of the game after you get those few up to 100%.
other than that, i really recommend the game, for people who have also lives, work or something, there is easily a weeks worth of playtime here
windows will declare ANY unsigned program to be malware without even scanning it. ffs dont use defender, use an actual anti-virus program to scan files. the game is clean
I love, love, LOVE the game so far. I'm genuinely interested in the story and actually find the H scenes as a hard second here.
I'd like to work with you on your project as a proofreader to take care of grammar inconsistencies. How would I reach out to you about joining your team?
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It will be a good ending if akari (red witch) will be able to meet with Jack in flesh & evryone will survive.
It will be the worst ending. Akari must be only ours,fuck to that jack. You dirty moron 😠😠.
The game is pretty okay and the story quite good (even if it's too slow for me), but PLEASE make an effort on the English !!! There are so many typos and even grammatical errors it's painful to read sometimes >_< (I'm not a native speaker but the errors are not even high-school level).
I personally prefer slower updates but with quality, this bad English nearly makes me want to drop the game. Too bad because otherwise the job is pretty good overall.
EDIT : went to the end but I drop the game, the text is really shitty quality now, Google trad do a better job.
Im from Germany and havent learned English in a Native Way but i dont know what your Problem is.
Its probably your Second Visual Novel , i find the Writing very good and the English is always understandable and Contains no Misspelling or Gramatical Errors.
Play games like Halfway house, Esteria, My New Memories, Price of Power or Eternum and you will see what good English really is.
For Dark Magic the first half is okay but after that the text quality becomes more bad with every scene. Anyone can objectively sees that.
And no, as you can see it's not my second visual novel, I've done enough, independent ones like dark magic and more professional ones like those you can find on Mangagamer.
But hey, if you enjoy that level of English and it doesn't break your immersion good for you. Personally I prefer to play better quality games, that's all.
Maybe its just the Writing Style?
Ive also played Halfway House , My new Memories and Eternum and i dont see any differences in the Quality of Writing , just the Style.
lol when Nami and Jack bang in Jacks house Jack says how long hes waited to see Nami naked but at this point in the story i've already banged her like 500 times and see her naked constantly
is futa optional or?
cant believe itch is still hosting this pedophile game
wdym?
imwis.
"imwis". oh shut up, that helps literally no one. If you have a problem and someone else doesnt see it, explain it. They asked what makes the game pedophilic? I havent played it but i dont see anything remotely child looking other than Taka's kid and im positive that kids not involved in anything or else there would be a lot more complaints. i see nothing that says underage, so please elaborate
if you werent so IQ deficient, you'd realise it means "i mean what i said". end of story. if ppl cant read plain english, then they shouldnt be inventing acronyms that dont exist, l;et alone be using an english language website.
FYI: taka's kid engages in sexualised activity immediately after actual intercourse has taken place, and there is a widely known and widely circulated mod (it is part of the basic mod pack) to make the child nude.
from a person who enjoyed the the game, the game doesnt belong on THIS website. it belongs on the darkweb
Ok, dumbass, I know what imwis stands for. But clearly I had never played this game and the original comment probably didn't either. So instead of being an ass, just explain it like you did in the FYI. Not everyone has played every porn game on ITCH like you so clearly have. Imagine for a second you happened upon some random show on Netflix and some random review said "This show supports pedophilia!"
Are you just gonna agree with this one comment out of the million others that don't mention it at all, or are you gonna ask for some more information? I'd hope you'd ask for more info because we live in a time where people lie on the internet about anything and everything just for attention.
lol@all the pedos on their downvote campaign .. sensitive much, pedos?
Jelouse much? Why do you care. 😑
oh look, here's one now
... thanks I guess 😁 so.
Should I cry now jk hehe.
This game is best overall but there are some irritating things. Like we get respect from the queen of the kingdom but the MC gets easily insulted by that little bitch(azumi). Just remove that dirty girl from the game.
when is going to be the next update?
are updates still coming for this game?
Yes man, it's the main project of F lord.
But it takes time to update this wonderful game.
i mean ur right, i just wish i had a sene for when to expect an update. that way i can plan my downloads and whatnot. is there anywhere i can check like a progress report or something?
Any tips on the suspect killer case with taka?
It's easy to figure out if you paid attention to all the similarities between the 3 suspects and what happened to girl that was killed. A hint there might be more than one suspect.
"This title is hosted on an incompatible third-party website" for PC/Linux as well.
lost interest waiting.
My top 10 favorite visual novels:
1st: Dark Magic
2nd: Once in a Lifetime
3rd: Mythic Manor
4th: Harem Hotel
5th: My New Family
6th: Lucky Paradox
7th: Sisterly Love
8th: Shut up and Dance
9th: A Town Uncovered
10th: Mist
Honorable mentions: College Bound, College Kings, A House in a Rift, Awakening and Treasure of Nadia (<----this last one can easily be on 1st place on another category). I recommend all these games.
Bro do you know a game where there was some sort of love drugs that u had to make and u could control girls there was milf and sister. I played a long time ago now I can't remember. I think it was made on renpy please if u know reply.
it may be Take Over
This sound like Lab Rats, a game by Vren
Hmmmmm....love drugs. The only game that comes to mind is Lust Epidemic which are the same developers of Treasure of Nadia. There's a sister which is a nun and milf in the game and they were investigating a university. I don't know if it's that one, but do let me know.
"Corruption" ?
bro u are a god. it is corruption. thank you very very much, as for late reply i had left the hope i would find it ,soo yeah.....
Its Lewd town adventures :)
Take Over
I need to save this comment somewhere lol because I have played half of the games you listed and I know that you know what you are talking about
Its titled "Corruption" ?
I don't think I remember a game with that name.
Thanks for this must play list. I'm bouta start downloading.
You're most welcome!
this is a blessing for someone like me who is new to these games. Got hooked after randomly stumbling upon Oialt. Masterpiece.
thats like, every single one of the "im new around here" games.
try some decent ones, scroll my "collection" if you like
https://itch.io/c/1604708/ghrysts-collection
The grand majority of your list I have played them and you got some I haven't tried yet. Your list is great!
Is this game finished?
no, sadly
Why no sadly?
This game is owesome, nice graphics! Please do update me when V.0.0.15.0 released
MC looks creepy.
He looks like a younger Herbert the Pervert
Is this an incest thing? or did Airi adopt the Player character? I am just concerned cause he said she HAD him
has been a little while since i played, but im pretty certain MC was left on her doorstep
anyone know about this!?what should i do?
go here for codes
https://www.scribd.com/document/395216452/196815-Dark-Magic-Walkthrough
This is finished?
Anyone know how to open the locked scene?
I'm unsure as to whether or not to download the android version in case it's a porn parody of Trump or smth. MAGA lol.
red witch ending seems bittersweet, are there more in the future or is that the end?
I have completed the story till this update, but I have missed to unlock 3 scenes for Momoko as per the Book of Memory(99%)
How to know about how to trigger each one of them?
Stay awesome my dude.
Hi... I've finished the main story, but I'm stuck and need some help..
How to trigger the Cyborg girl event, i get the 1st event but seems like i can't continue it
And how to start the Mihina story too? A bit stuck there.
Hi F. Lord, could you tell me how long until the public release of V.0.14.0? Because I'm loving the depth of your storyline. But I nearly died laughing when being able to lash those girls butts as a punishment for what they did. (Not giving away any spoilers) and also, Some of the Characters in the character menu have N/A below their picture, What exactly does that mean? Please let me know, Thanks.
The Windows Mega link is invalid
i downloaded it here https://www.patreon.com/posts/dark-magic-v-0-6-47163638
Thanks
I rated this game 4 stars simply because of its detail, however there is only 1 game that has managed to score 5 stars from me and that one is called Serenity, the detail, storyline, characters and themes were all perfectly in tandem, but this game runs a very close 2nd, I like the detail and the abilities to corrupt the minds of the girls, but I think in order to make it better this game needs more added to it because it doesn't feel like it's finished yet.
Serenity? Are you kidding mate?
to be fair, there are 8 other games called Serenity on itch alone.. so who knows what one he's talking about
so can i get a bit of help? i'm suppose to look for something in the moms room but nothing is showing up. my first guess is the dildo but i'm pretty sure i already took that for the mom quest line so i dunno what i'm suppose to do here.(for the red witch quest)
Wait.....what?
So this game is finished? Cause Its say "released" but some feature like group corruption still in development and some of the girls story' like yasuko still unfinished
I think that just means it's playable because it says the release date was September 23rd 2018 but the most recent update was July 14th 2021
So i just finished what i can in the game, and i have to say, honestly this game is awesome. Lets start with the story first, it is so well written and it has good pacing, the charters each have there own charm to them, and they are well designed even down to the little details and in a game where a lot of them where the same attar its the little details that count and this game has nailed that. The working system is very fair making it not to much of a grind to gain money in game, the story while being light hearted at most points still shows that there is a time of darkness coming meaning we can see a darker story in future updates and im all for it. All and all if your looking for a nice adventure with very well written and designed charters this is the game for you. Keep up the great work creator i look forward to future updates.
This game is very great, it has long good story, a lot of beautiful girl, the scene it's not repetitive, the grind is just enough, not to hard not to easy, and it's free. Very good game
Is there an up to date walkthrough somewhere?
I am somehow stuck with the Magic route storyline. It says I have to 'continue magic route story-line to progress' but it does not say how and I have been searching for a couple of hours by now.
overall its a good game, with heaps of story content..
but expect heavy rail-roading down paths you dont want to take, none of the story paths seem to be optional.
i hope we get to go out on the sisters ship, first goddamn opportunity i get, imma feed Nami to a shark and get her outta my hair for good. i have absolutely no interest in her, as a figure or a character, she is unattractive and has a boring and unexciting personality, and yet for some reason the game has decided im in love with her (even after choosing to NOT tell her 'i love you' when given the rare choice) and it seems now she's the one im going to be forced to marry, although she would be my last choice from everyone in the game.
this has nothing to do ewith her looks - but her personality is that of a cow, she comes in for milking when called, she goes back out to pasture when dismissed, and thats the entire extent of her personality.
.... oh, and what happened to the MAGIC? can only use it on a handful of women to start with, so its pretty much not even part of the game after you get those few up to 100%.
other than that, i really recommend the game, for people who have also lives, work or something, there is easily a weeks worth of playtime here
malware detection...... sup with that ? but on my nod32 it says clean?
windows will declare ANY unsigned program to be malware without even scanning it. ffs dont use defender, use an actual anti-virus program to scan files. the game is clean
thank you F*** Lord, i died form laughter at catch and Cum part.
also i think i know what will happen next so i say it now.
RIP 3rd best girl
Lmao
Windows defender found a trojan...
I'm 90% sure it's a false positive because the same thing happened with other games when renpy updated
windows defender couldnt find Nami's fat arse even if she sat on it. use a real anti-virus program and ignore windows bullshit
Really good game, plenty of content!
Awesome release as always!!
But is it just me, or Mihina and Nami and nowhere near similar?
no, you right
I liked the breastfeed fantasy
More pls
I love, love, LOVE the game so far. I'm genuinely interested in the story and actually find the H scenes as a hard second here.
I'd like to work with you on your project as a proofreader to take care of grammar inconsistencies. How would I reach out to you about joining your team?